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Dorian was making his usual rounds at the hospital. It was in the middle of the night and all was quiet. The nurses were heading out and he could hear them chatting as they pulled out their jingly keys to get ready to head to their cars. He could hear all of them throughout the hospital. He held a clipboard that he was all too familiar with. Pacing down the empty halls in the dim lighting, he entered the room with the single patient. If he had been human, he would have sighed, but instead he just dropped his shoulders and gave a weary look of sadness. The beautiful, clean face of his Jane Doe lay in the bed, her eyes closed to the world. They had been for a while, and yet her heart was still working as her brain had lost itself. The hospital was debating whether or not to pull the plug on this mystery person. There was no way to know if it was what she wanted or if they should wait until her face was claimed to be known. Personally, Dorian wanted to keep her alive, but he knew that the brain would never spark on its own.
Just looking at her face showed him that she had mounds of potential to live again, but even then, he still couldn't help but fall in love with that same face. He saw it every day at the same check up time. If nothing was going on, he would pull up a chair and tell her stories. This sleeping woman knew more about him than anyone alive. She could be a murderous monster for all he knew, but seeing her peaceful face made him careless about that subject.
Slow, silent steps were taken to arrive to the side of her bed and he looked upon her with admiration and care, a small smile playing at his lips. Even with human skin, flawed without the need for makeup, he found hers beautiful. He brushed her hair back out of habit before pulling up his usual chair and taking a seat next to her bed. It could be creepy, but he was the one who took care of her in all aspects while she slept. Brushed her teeth and cleaned her. Being alive for so long, those little things that might be embarrassing to most, were nothing to him. He leaned in on his hands, his elbows resting on the bed as he looked at her. "You deserve a second chance. I can no longer see you like this." He made up his mind right then, though he had been battling with the decision for the longest time. Dorian never turned anyone without a good reason.
Leaning forward, his bottom being removed from the chair, he gazed at her still and beautiful face for one last time before moving the hair from her neck. He was as gentle as could be with her. His fingers barely caressing her skin as he pulled her head to the side slowly. His lips slid across the sensitive area of her skin before he hovered them over her jugular. Pulling back slightly so he could actually get some thrust into the bite, he lurched forward and sunk his teeth into her neck before quickly pulling away. Not many could refuse to suck the blood, but after years of teaching himself to ignore it, it was like nothing to him to just stay away from the blood. There were many reasons that he didn't like to turn people. One of them was the pain they were in from the venom of his bite.
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Many people believed that when someone went into a coma, they were basically brain dead. The truth was, the brain impulses that most coma patients had, couldn't be read by any regular scanner. They were an abnormal kind that not many picked up on. So even though they might assume she was in a dreamless sleep. It was quite the opposite. For what felt like centuries she had drifted in and out of her mind, mostly haunted by the same strange, cool voice. At first it was tentative and formal, but then it transformed into something else. Although she rarely could understand what he was saying or remember it, she could certainly find comfort in his words. Maybe, as long as she heard him, she would be alright. She held onto that small hope in the dismal abyss of her coma. Not that she knew that a coma was what had her trapped.
The seering pain shot through her body like cold ice. She couldn't remember the last time she'd cried like this. It wasn't exactly hot or cold. It was both at the same time, torturing her every nerve cell until it burst with the pain. Her arms shot up and grabbed the nearest thing she could find, which was a cold hand. It felt like marble underneath her touch, but before she could examine the pain continued to rush through her body, distracting her now active brain from all it's other functions.
"Please." was all she managed to beg before her body shook violently with the waves of pain that were pulsing through it. She squeezed the cold hand as tightly as she could, her eyes still closed. She had been asleep for what felt like centuries but by now she felt exhausted again. The pain didn't desist for what felt like centuries, but it did eventually start to numb and slowly disappear. She felt her body changing slightly as it did. It no longer seemed like every muscle in her body ached, or that she was trapped.
She opened her eyes for the first time in eighteen years and recoiled from the blinding hospital lights. She shot up in bed and looked around. She felt cold but not in a way that could be fixed by a blanket. When her eyes focused on the room around her she saw his face. She looked at him with horror and slight revulsion. It wasn't like he wasn't extremely beautiful, but she sensed that he was the reason she felt this way right now. She opened her mouth to speak but nothing came out. When words finally came all she could mutter was [b]"What happened?"
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Dorian covered his mouth in a feverish sadness as he watched her writhe in pain. He never could handle watching this, but he always made himself look. It showed him to not do it with every little sign of sickness and to only do it when severely needed. If he didn't watch, it wouldn't be painful for him as well. Her hand shot out and grasped his firmly and he squeezed back in attempts to comfort her, trying to hold her still as best he could without making her even more uncomfortable and pained. Her skin was warm, but he could feel it cool quickly as she changed. It was the saddest touch in the world.
She let out a cry of plea and he choked back a sob as he watched. She was moving by herself for the first time, but it wasn't what he wanted to see her feeling or doing. He wanted to see her smile and be completely happy, but there was no way of doing that successfully while she was in a coma. This seemed to be the only way to make her live again. She would be smiling soon, he hoped. Her body started to slow to a slight shiver and the look of pain on her face softened as the transformation completed itself. Her hand was almost as cold as his, though to him, she was still soft and warm.
Her eyes opened like they would have if you were just simply blinking. Dorian gazed into them as if he had known them his whole life. She looked around quickly before her eyes locked onto him. The look she gave was what he was used to, but it always hurt to be so ridiculed just from a glance. He looked away for a moment to compose himself before looking back at her. "You...were in a car accident. You've been in a coma for eighteen years now." He was so compelled to call her Jane though he knew that was probably not her real name. "I've turned you into a vampire so that you might live. They were going to take life support off of you if I didn't do this, I'm sorry. What's your name?" This was a lot to take in and he figured he wouldn't get the name at first, but it didn't hurt to ask. Dorian shifted in his seat, though he was physically comfortable and stared at her, waiting for some sort of reaction with intense wonder.
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![[image]](http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj200/sweeney-lovers/KaB/se137.jpg) EMMA madden How can you see into my eyes like open doors Leading you down into my core where I've become so numb Without a soul My spirit sleeping somewhere cold Until you find it there and lead It back home
Her body no longer felt pain. She wondered if she would ever feel anything again. All she could feel was cold, and a deep emotional sting that she had no idea how to deal with. Looking at him, already subconsciously knowing what he'd done, she shivered. His eyes were too pained and sweet for her to want to be mad at him. She looked at him, slightly captivated. He was certainly a beautiful man, but she couldn't let that get to her. She needed answers, but she couldn't speak, not yet. Her throat was still closed, constricted from years of silence. She wondered if she'd ever remember how to speak again. She knew that it was in her somewhere, but she probably spoke differently from what was cool these days. How long had she been in this hospital bed anyway?
She watched his lips move and tried so hard to concentrate on what he said. With every word it felt like a dagger driving into her heart. It had really been eighteen years since she'd arrived here? Things were definitely different from what she remembered. She was apprehensive about the whole situation. Then he said that word. A word she had never really liked, but it was there, hanging on his lips. Vampire? She couldn't believe it, and yet somewhere inside she knew it was true. She supposed she could thank him, but she really wasn't thankful she'd missed her family's entire life. If he wanted to do this, why didn't he do it earlier? Who had been keeping her on life support anyway? She grimaced and looked at him with new anger in her eyes. She recognized his voice. It felt oddly comforting but it couldn't deter her from her anger. Even if it felt familiar in some way.
"What? Vampire!" She didn't want to say something like 'there's no such thing.' because she knew there was, and she was one. She felt the reality hit her as she pictured her son's face of fright. She remembered the car crash and it could have taken her breath away if she was breathing at all. She couldn't believe the way her life had passed and she'd literally slept through the whole thing. She hopped out of the bed, not caring that she was only in a hospital gown. She could barely feel the cool on her back anyway. Before she could stop herself she slapped him across the face. "Did I give you permission to do that? I have nothing to live for anymore! My kids are all grown up and they probably think I abandoned them or something like that!" She growled, something she didn't know she could do.
"Whatever. You won't get a thanks from me buddy." She looked him up and down and turned her back toward him, then realized that she was naked. Her eyes widened and she turned back to him. "If you must know my name is Emma. Now give me some clothes so I can leave." She said with a huff.
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They way her eyes looked horrified made Dorian's throat want to skip, but he kept talking smoothly as he always did. Sometimes he wished that he were human for the most insignificant reasons. Like the fact that he could show more emotion that way and didn't seem like everything was completely fine all of the time. Her feared look quickly turned into shock and then anger, making him recoil only slightly. Dorian deserved the hateful glare, but he was still saddened and hurt. He only did what he thought was best for her.
He finished his few sentences and waited for a verbal reaction, which he knew was coming and it wouldn't be pleasant. He cringed in his mind as she started to speak out her anger, but his face remained calm. He averted his eyes out of shame, but quickly looked back to show that he wasn't about to bend and regret his decision. He would have done it again if he had to choose. Dorian pulled back, moving out of her way as she stood up. Of course she wouldn't be sitting still, but when she stood up, she faced him. A marble hand, like his, struck him across the face. His cheek fell to the side and his gelled hair fell out of place. Dorian stared at the floor for a moment before slowly returning his gaze to her as she sneered at him. "You weren't going to live at all. I gave you a new life because I knew you had potential to live after so many years have been taken away from you. Now you don't have to die without anyone coming to your funeral. We had no idea of your name or where you came from or what you're wishes were." He stated calmly, gazing at her with hopeful eyes.
Dorian kept his eyes on the back of her head, not even thinking about looking down. He had seen her body before, but she had been sleeping. He had more respect for her than that. "Emma..." He breathed before realizing his fault. "I'm sorry, but I can't let you leave here. I must tell you what you need to know before you go out into the real world." His gaze was serious and hard, though in his mind, he was only thinking about how much he wanted to comfort her and bend to her wishes.
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She didn't mean to snap at him. In a way, she owed him her life, or her unlife anyway. She couldn't help but wonder how things would work out for her in the long run. Her family would die and so would anyone else she managed to get close to. That was, unless she turned them. She couldn't even think of that right now. She was so hungry but she knew it wasn't for food. She also knew that she couldn't just attack people for her own selfish needs. The thing that was gnawing at her insides would just have to wait. She grimaced at the thought of drinking blood. She wasn't sure if she would ever get used to that.
"My wishes?" She asked, after hearing him speak. "Well now you know what they are. I wish you would have just left me in that damn bed!" She said, her eyes tearing up. She thought vampires weren't supposed to get emotional. She had only heard myths and legends about them in her lifetime but she always heard them portrayed as stoney creatures with no feelings but those of lust and sex. She felt the tears escape down her cheek and she felt anger boil in her blood. She never cried. Even before, when she was a loving, laughing human, she never cried. Crying was a weakness she couldn't afford, especially after her husband left her with three children. She couldn't understand why she would cry now. "I would have preferred to be cremated also. So, there wouldn't be a funeral." She said, stinging from the thought of nobody being there. She knew she was sort of being a smartass but she didn't care.
"Don't you dare say my name." She said pointing at him in anger. "How could you do this to me? How could you turn me into a monster?" She asked the tears falling freely now. She didn't want to cry. She hated crying so much, and yet he managed to bring it out in her. She gave him a look of defiance. "I don't have to listen to you. You may have given me this "gift", but that doesn't mean I have to stay around and hear a lecture from you. I'll get my own damn clothes." She said and tightened her hospital gown around her body, so it covered most of her up. She hated the thought of being so exposed for everyone to see. Her pale skin must be a blinking light screaming that she wasn't like them. Of course, she probably hadn't gotten much sun in her coma. "Don't follow me either." She said, warning him with an icy tongue before she ran out of the room and into the hallway. She had to get away from him, in case he tried to chase her.
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Dorian lowered his eyes, ashamed. He suddenly felt regret, but he still would have done it again just to see her live in some way. It was over and done with and there was no turning back. He gazed back up with his ember eyes, trying to keep his chin up and look confident in his work. The crying got to him and he couldn't keep himself from showing his own frown. Vampires weren't heartless creatures unless they wanted to be. Each time he turned someone, he had trouble not crying or showing that he was quite emotional in some way. When she spoke of her previous wishes, Dorian couldn't help but choke back a whimper. "I-I'm sorry." He was only sorry that she felt this way and that it had to come to him turning her. He wished she would accept it, but they never did. It was always hard to see their faces.
He stared into her eyes as she pointed at him, his own seeking for forgiveness. "You're not a monster. I can teach you to become quite normal." He couldn't believe he was talking like he was a professor at a school given the extreme circumstances. Dorian wanted so much to wipe away her tears and try to comfort her, but it was he that made her feel this way. She was a newborn vampires and could easily throw him across the room. He tried follow her closely as if he were some sort of conscience. "You should hear what I have to say before you go off and do something you will regret. Trust me." He stopped and suddenly wished he didn't say the last bit. Of course she wouldn't trust him. But he didn't want anyone to die because he was to weak to stop her.
Dorian disobeyed her request and rushed out after her, his white doctors jacket swooping from behind him as he rushed to follow. "Emma. Please. Stay." He said, knowing full well she could hear no matter how far away she was in the hallway.
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